If you really want to make your writing stand out, you need to actively hunt for clichés in your prose.  Clichés are tried and true, yes, but they are also boring and lazy.  You are a writer who wants to tell the best possible tale…do so by hunting those cliché’s down and killing them.

This may require another author’s eyes.  A critique partner, even a beta reader if you tell them in advance that you want them  to look for clichés.

What are some clichés you can look for?  Here are a FEW.  There are thousands, if not more.

A breath of fresh air.

Dumb as a rock.

Dog tired.

Dog days of summer.

Fresh as a daisy.

Sardines in a can.

Sharp as a tack/pin.

Played like a violin/Stradivarius.

As cold as ice.

Better late than never.

Time flies/time flies when you’re having fun.

Old hat.

No bones about it.

Like the pot calling the kettle black.

Dead as a doornail.

Stiff as a board.

Bored stiff.

Bored to tears/death.

I think you get the idea.  These things creep into our writing without us being aware of them.  Frequently, it takes another set of eyes to reveal these clichés. 

You can take some of these and turn them on their head.  What if you said, “Dead as a zombie”?  This is fresh.  This gives you a different picture of someone that may be dead and just extremely tired.  If you are writing a zombie story, this would be a phrase we’d identify as a thematic phrase because it echoes what your tale is about…zombies.  And, of course, if you use this phrase, you get a very different sort of picture as zombies aren’t entirely dead.  Your character could be telling another character that this person who is dead as a zombie isn’t really dead.

Have fun killing clichés.  Doing so will improve your writing and make it fresh and memorable.